Editing Examples

Before ProperComm

Bob,
I hate you!!!! I will always hate you! I will never forgive you. YOU screwed this up, not ME. We HAVE to communicate only because of the kids. NO other purpose. If you want to come to the Dr. appt. that is fine. It’s at 5pm Friday.

After ProperComm

We are required to communicate because of the kids. If you want to come to the Dr. appt. that is fine. It is at 5pm Friday.

Before ProperComm

Michael, Beth’s next doctor appointment is Oct. 9 at 9 am. I scheduled it on my day as usual and I intend to take her as I always have. If you’re not too busy with your skank girlfriend or traveling with all the money you tell the court you don’t have, feel free to show up since you told your lawyer you always do. You are such a liar.

After ProperComm

Beth’s next doctor appointment is Oct. 9 at 9 am. I intend to take her. Please show up.

Before ProperComm

Stephanie – Get over your anorexic self and move on. If you really didn’t want me you wouldn’t be saying those things. Felicia is not a skank whore – she is very sweet and caring. You should be thankful that she cares so much for Beth. She and Beth have really bonded. Beth even calls her Mommy. Maybe if you weren’t such a bitch you would try to see what is best for Bethy and not you. I will be at the appointment.

After ProperComm

I will be at the appointment.

Before ProperComm

Billy has a doctor appointment tomorrow, can you please drop off the insurance card and half of the co-pay?

GOOD MESSAGE

Before ProperComm

Your boyfriend can pay now that you are sleeping with him. Since you got that ridiculous order of
protection granted, I can’t go to the doctor so I’m not dropping off the card or the money. You chose to exclude me from your life-deal with it (you’re probably sleeping with the judge).

After ProperComm

I won’t be dropping off the card or the money.